"the man was too busy letting the three women on the porch of the big house next door make a fuss over him." Does that mean what I think it means?? Family already? :3
"He knew what sort of house this was – and he knew what sort of work its female occupants did." Haha, yes it does! XD I love Ed's mental roll-of-the-eyes here. Like "Ugh, that Mustang."
That "little" comment really put Edward off his guard for a moment :D Without it, he would have been set to walk away, I reckon. Good use of his faults to bait him into doing what you want!
"“Oh, nobody’s working up there tonight. The house is closed for business. Tonight is all for Roy. New Year’s Eve always is.”" BAHAHAHA XD Oh, Ed's head just exploded then! And Roy's smug smirk back shows he knows exactly what Ed's thinking <3
Madame Christmas to the rescue! XD
I love it! Eagerly awaiting chapter two and Ed's reactions to further shenanigans!
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Date: 2009-01-01 01:32 am (UTC)"He knew what sort of house this was – and he knew what sort of work its female occupants did." Haha, yes it does! XD I love Ed's mental roll-of-the-eyes here. Like "Ugh, that Mustang."
That "little" comment really put Edward off his guard for a moment :D Without it, he would have been set to walk away, I reckon. Good use of his faults to bait him into doing what you want!
"“Oh, nobody’s working up there tonight. The house is closed for business. Tonight is all for Roy. New Year’s Eve always is.”" BAHAHAHA XD Oh, Ed's head just exploded then! And Roy's smug smirk back shows he knows exactly what Ed's thinking <3
Madame Christmas to the rescue! XD
I love it! Eagerly awaiting chapter two and Ed's reactions to further shenanigans!