Grats on reaching the word count :3 Now you just need to finish the story. No rushin', though - do it good an' proper!
I like that what he's doing is going back to when it was pure and beautiful. I mean, I know he's burning down a building and all, but I can imagine him as a young guy, figuring it out and practicing with little things, and this is just that on a bigger scale, because it's not hurting anyone. I can understand the look of wonder on his face now - when he was dampening the flames.
Aww, maan. Roy's a jerk, in those little fantasies of his. I want to know what (or who) just burst into flames there. I'm guessing Roy's one of the things.
Sorry this 'review' isn't very long, and possibly doesn't make sense in places - I'm tired, and just about to head off to bed.
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Date: 2008-11-26 11:52 am (UTC)I like that what he's doing is going back to when it was pure and beautiful. I mean, I know he's burning down a building and all, but I can imagine him as a young guy, figuring it out and practicing with little things, and this is just that on a bigger scale, because it's not hurting anyone. I can understand the look of wonder on his face now - when he was dampening the flames.
Aww, maan. Roy's a jerk, in those little fantasies of his. I want to know what (or who) just burst into flames there. I'm guessing Roy's one of the things.
Sorry this 'review' isn't very long, and possibly doesn't make sense in places - I'm tired, and just about to head off to bed.